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=Introduction=
This is the page for the proposition of amendments to [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft|Pirate Manifesto's First Draft]]; amendments' proposition is the main activity during Pirate Manifesto's Stage Two.

Remember that the deadline for the proposition of amendments is <s>1st</s> 8th of November of 2008 at 23:59 UTC. Any amendment proposed after this deadline will be removed from this page and not included in the voting.
* '''NOTE''': After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, deadlines are extended by one week.
==Versions of First Draft in each of pirate parties languages==
To make easier to everyone to understand the contents of the Pirate Manifesto's First Draft:

* [http://www.partidopirata.es/w/images/f/f3/PirateManifestoFirstDraft_EN.pdf English Version]
* [ Swedish Version]
* [ Danish Version]
* [[Media:PirateManifestoFirstDraft_DE.pdf| German Version]]
* [ Dutch Version]
* [[ FrenchManifestoTranslation | French Version ]]
* [ Polish Version]
* [http://www.partidopirata.es/w/images/2/24/PirateManifestoFirstDraft_ES.pdf Spanish Version]
* [ Suomi Version]

==Versions of this wiki page in each of pirate parties web sites==
To make easier to everyone to understand the rules and procedures of Pirate Manifesto Stage Two:

* [ Piratpartiet Sverige's Version]
* Pirate Party of the United States can use this version, as it's written in English
* [ Piratpartiet i Danmark's Version]
* [https://wiki.piratenpartei.de/index.php?title=Internationales_Manifest/%C3%84nderungsantr%C3%A4ge Piratenpartei Deutschland's Version]
* [ Piraten Partei Oesterreich's Version]
* [ Piraten Partij's Version]
* [ Parti Pirate's Version]
* [ Partia Piratów's Version]
* [http://www.partidopirata.es/wiki/Manifiesto_Pirata_Presentación_de_Enmiendas Partido Pirata's Version]
* [ Piraattipuolue's Version]
* Pirate Party of Australia can use this version, as it's written in English

=Contact=
People having questions about Stage Two and the proposition of amendments may send their mails to [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Contact|the responsible of Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central]], '''presidente[dot]jdn[at]partidopirata[dot]es'''.
=Explanation about how to amend the First Draft=
'''Please read carefully each one of the following sections before proposing amendments'''
==Amendments' structure==
[[Pirate Manifesto Amendments structure|Explanation of the amendments' structure]]

==Rules for proposing amendments==
[[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Rules|Explanation of the rules for proposing amendments]]

==Rules for voting amendments==
[[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Voting Rules|Explanation of the rules for voting amendments]]

==Eligible voters==
[[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Eligible Voters|List of eligible voters]]

==Sample Amendment==
This is not a real amendment, just an example of how to present amendments in this page.
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#Preamble|Preamble, 3rd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Sample Amendment|Contents of the Sample Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Sample Amendment|Discussion on the Sample Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* No
===Merged amendment?===
* Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

=Explanation about how to amend the Second Draft=
This is on a new page to improve readability and not wreck this page as documentation of the forst round:
[[Second_Amendment_Phase|Second Amendment Phase]]

=PROPOSED AMENDMENTS UP TO DATE=
==Amendments sorted by section==
In [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments sorted by paragraph|this wiki page]] all valid amendments can be studied, sorted by the paragraphs they aim to modify. [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Contact|The responsible of the Amendments Central]] will manage the contents of that page.
==First Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#Preamble|Preamble, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Amendment|Contents of the First Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto First Amendment|Discussion on the First Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Nineth Amendment|Nineth Amendment]]</s>
* Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually
==Second Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Author.27s Rights|About Author's Rights, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Second Amendment|Contents of the Second Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Second Amendment|Discussion on the Second Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.</s>
* Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually
==Third Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Author.27s Rights|About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Third Amendment|Contents of the Third Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Third Amendment|Discussion on the Third Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Seventh Amendment|Seventh Amendment]]</s>
* <s>Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually</s>
* <s>Held up by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch (original proposal by RMS)</s>
* ('''NOTE'''): An amendment cannot be recovered 40 hours after deadline.

==Fourth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Restrictions of Ideas and Information|About Restrictions of Ideas and Information, 1st paragraph]],
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Fourth Amendment|Contents of the Fourth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Fourth Amendment|Discussion on the Fourth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.</s>
* Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually
==Fifth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Information Society|About Information Society, 1st paragraph]],
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Fifth Amendment|Contents of the Fifth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Fifth Amendment|Discussion on the Fifth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.</s>
* Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually
==Sixth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Author.27s Rights|About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Sixth Amendment|Contents of the Sixth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Sixth Amendment|Discussion on the Sixth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Seventh Amendment|Seventh Amendment]]</s>
* Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.
==Seventh Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Author.27s Rights|About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Seventh Amendment|Contents of the Seventh Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Seventh Amendment|Discussion on the Seventh Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Is valid by itself and results from merging [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Third Amendment|Third Amendment]] and [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Sixth Amendment|Sixth Amendment]]</s>
* <s>After Third Amendment was annulled, this merged amendment makes no sense until new amendments affect the same paragraph of First Draft. Thus, this amendment becomes annulled.</s>
* Is valid by itself and results from merging [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Sixth Amendment|Sixth Amendment]] and [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Eighteenth Amendment|Eighteenth Amendment]]
==Eighth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#Preamble|Preamble, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Eighth Amendment|Contents of the Eighth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Eighth Amendment|Discussion on the Eighth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* Merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Nineth Amendment|Nineth Amendment]].

==Nineth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#Preamble|Preamble, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Nineth Amendment|Contents of the Nineth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Nineth Amendment|Discussion on the Nineth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* Is valid by itself and results from merging <s>[[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#First Amendment|First Amendment]] and</s> [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Eighth Amendment|Eighth Amendment]] and [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Eleventh Amendment|Eleventh Amendment]]
==Tenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#Preamble|Preamble, 1st paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Civil Rights and Liberties|About Civil Rights and Liberties, 1st paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Information Society|About Information Society, 1st paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Information Society|About Information Society, 2nd paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About non-core issues|About non-core issues, 1st paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About non-core issues|About non-core issues, 2nd paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About non-core issues|About non-core issues, 3rd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Tenth Amendment|Contents of the Tenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Tenth Amendment|Discussion on the Tenth Amendment]]
===Merged amendment?===
* Has been annulled, because of not observing [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments structure|amendments' structure]]
** "''Only is allowed the modification of one paragraph per amendment, unless there are other related paragraphs that require to be modified if the first one is modified.''"
** Tenth Amendment splitted into amendments [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Eleventh Amendment|Eleventh]], [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Twelfth Amendment|Twelfth]], [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Thirteenth Amendment|Thirteenth]], [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Fourteenth Amendment|Fourteenth]] & [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Fifteenth Amendment|Fifteenth]]

==Eleventh Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#Preamble|Preamble, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Eleventh Amendment|Contents of the Eleventh Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Eleventh Amendment|Discussion on the Eleventh Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* Merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Nineth Amendment|Nineth Amendment]].

==Twelfth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Civil Rights and Liberties|About Civil Rights and Liberties, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Twelfth Amendment|Contents of the Twelfth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Twelfth Amendment|Discussion on the Twelfth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others</s>.
* Merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Nineteenth Amendment|Nineteenth Amendment]].
==Thirteenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Information Society|About Information Society, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Thirteenth Amendment|Contents of the Thirteenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Thirteenth Amendment|Discussion on the Thirteenth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

==Fourteenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Information Society|About Information Society, 2nd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Fourteenth Amendment|Contents of the Fourteenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Fourteenth Amendment|Discussion on the Fourteenth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

==Fifteenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About non-core issues|About non-core issues, 1st paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About non-core issues|About non-core issues, 2nd paragraph]]
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About non-core issues|About non-core issues, 3rd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Fifteenth Amendment|Contents of the Fifteenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Fifteenth Amendment|Discussion on the Fifteenth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

==Sixteenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#Preamble|Preamble, 2nd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Sixteenth Amendment|Contents of the Sixteenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Sixteenth Amendment|Discussion on the Fifteenth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* No (author has not specified anything, thus it's not a blocking amendment)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Annulled due to having been proposed [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Introduction|out of time]]</s>
* After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, this amendment became valid by itself and has not been merged with others.
==Seventeenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Civil Rights and Liberties|About Civil rights and liberties, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Seventeenth Amendment|Contents of the Seventeenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Seventeenth Amendment|Discussion on the Seventeenth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* No (author has not specified anything, thus it's not a blocking amendment)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Annulled due to having been proposed [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Introduction|out of time]]</s>
* After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, this amendment became valid in spite of having been proposed out of time; thus, is merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Nineteenth Amendment|Nineteenth Amendment]].
==Eighteenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Author's Rights|About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Eighteenth Amendment|Contents of the Eighteenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Sixteenth Amendment|Discussion on the Eighteenth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* No (author has not specified anything, thus it's not a blocking amendment)
===Merged amendment?===
* <s>Annulled due to having been proposed [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Introduction|out of time]]</s>
* After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, this amendment became valid in spite of having been proposed out of time; thus, is merged to become [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Seventh Amendment|Seventh Amendment]].
==Nineteenth Amendment==
===Affected paragraphs/sections===
* [[Pirate Manifesto First Draft#About Civil Rights and Liberties|About Civil rights and liberties, 1st paragraph]]
===Amendment contents===
* [[Pirate Manifesto Nineteenth Amendment|Contents of the Nineteenth Amendment]]
===Discussion on the amendment===
* [[Talk:Pirate Manifesto Nineteenth Amendment|Discussion on the Nineteenth Amendment]]
===Blocking amendment?===
* no (according to the rules)
===Merged amendment?===
* Is valid by itself and results from merging [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Twelfth Amendment|Twelfth Amendment]] and [[Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central#Seventeenth Amendment|Seventeenth Amendment]]
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