Pirate Manifesto Sixteenth Amendment

List of arguments

I

• Incoherent and sudden in relation to earlier text. Not necessary.

Amendment

Pirate Manifesto's First Draft would be modified as follows:

• The following would be removed from the 2nd paragraph of The Preamble:
  • "When corruption and ignorance run through the streets of our cities, having left common sense and forethought for dead, we must act, or be trampled."

                                                             Dragu, Finland, 8th November 2008

Dragu (Piraattipuolue)