Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central

Introduction

This is the page for the proposition of amendments to Pirate Manifesto's First Draft; amendments' proposition is the main activity during Pirate Manifesto's Stage Two.

Remember that the deadline for the proposition of amendments is 1st 8th of November of 2008 at 23:59 UTC. Any amendment proposed after this deadline will be removed from this page and not included in the voting.

• NOTE: After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, deadlines are extended by one week.

Versions of First Draft in each of pirate parties languages

To make easier to everyone to understand the contents of the Pirate Manifesto's First Draft:

• English Version
• [ Swedish Version]
• [ Danish Version]
• German Version
• [ Dutch Version]
• French Version
• [ Polish Version]
• Spanish Version
• [ Suomi Version]

Versions of this wiki page in each of pirate parties web sites

To make easier to everyone to understand the rules and procedures of Pirate Manifesto Stage Two:

• [ Piratpartiet Sverige's Version]
• Pirate Party of the United States can use this version, as it's written in English
• [ Piratpartiet i Danmark's Version]
• Piratenpartei Deutschland's Version
• [ Piraten Partei Oesterreich's Version]
• [ Piraten Partij's Version]
• [ Parti Pirate's Version]
• [ Partia Piratów's Version]
• Partido Pirata's Version
• [ Piraattipuolue's Version]
• Pirate Party of Australia can use this version, as it's written in English

Contact

People having questions about Stage Two and the proposition of amendments may send their mails to the responsible of Pirate Manifesto Amendments Central, presidente[dot]jdn[at]partidopirata[dot]es.

Explanation about how to amend the First Draft

Please read carefully each one of the following sections before proposing amendments

Amendments' structure

Explanation of the amendments' structure

Rules for proposing amendments

Explanation of the rules for proposing amendments

Rules for voting amendments

Explanation of the rules for voting amendments

Eligible voters

List of eligible voters

Sample Amendment

This is not a real amendment, just an example of how to present amendments in this page.

Affected paragraphs/sections

• Preamble, 3rd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Sample Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Sample Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• No

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

Explanation about how to amend the Second Draft

This is on a new page to improve readability and not wreck this page as documentation of the forst round: Second Amendment Phase

PROPOSED AMENDMENTS UP TO DATE

Amendments sorted by section

In this wiki page all valid amendments can be studied, sorted by the paragraphs they aim to modify. The responsible of the Amendments Central will manage the contents of that page.

First Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• Preamble, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the First Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the First Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Merged to become Nineth Amendment
• Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually

Second Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Author's Rights, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Second Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Second Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.
• Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually

Third Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Third Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Third Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Merged to become Seventh Amendment
• Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually
• Held up by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch (original proposal by RMS)
• (NOTE): An amendment cannot be recovered 40 hours after deadline.

Fourth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Restrictions of Ideas and Information, 1st paragraph,

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Fourth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Fourth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.
• Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually

Fifth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Information Society, 1st paragraph,

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Fifth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Fifth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.
• Annulled by Piraten Partei Deutschland international proxy, Jens Seipenbusch, because of his party proposing amendments as a party and not individually

Sixth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Sixth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Sixth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Merged to become Seventh Amendment
• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

Seventh Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Seventh Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Seventh Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and results from merging Third Amendment and Sixth Amendment
• After Third Amendment was annulled, this merged amendment makes no sense until new amendments affect the same paragraph of First Draft. Thus, this amendment becomes annulled.
• Is valid by itself and results from merging Sixth Amendment and Eighteenth Amendment

Eighth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• Preamble, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Eighth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Eighth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Merged to become Nineth Amendment.

Nineth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• Preamble, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Nineth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Nineth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and results from merging First Amendment and Eighth Amendment and Eleventh Amendment

Tenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• Preamble, 1st paragraph
• About Civil Rights and Liberties, 1st paragraph
• About Information Society, 1st paragraph
• About Information Society, 2nd paragraph
• About non-core issues, 1st paragraph
• About non-core issues, 2nd paragraph
• About non-core issues, 3rd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Tenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Tenth Amendment

Merged amendment?

• Has been annulled, because of not observing amendments' structure
  • "Only is allowed the modification of one paragraph per amendment, unless there are other related paragraphs that require to be modified if the first one is modified."
  • Tenth Amendment splitted into amendments Eleventh, Twelfth, Thirteenth, Fourteenth & Fifteenth

Eleventh Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• Preamble, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Eleventh Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Eleventh Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Merged to become Nineth Amendment.

Twelfth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Civil Rights and Liberties, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Twelfth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Twelfth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.
• Merged to become Nineteenth Amendment.

Thirteenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Information Society, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Thirteenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Thirteenth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

Fourteenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Information Society, 2nd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Fourteenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Fourteenth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

Fifteenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About non-core issues, 1st paragraph
• About non-core issues, 2nd paragraph
• About non-core issues, 3rd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Fifteenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Fifteenth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

Sixteenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• Preamble, 2nd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Sixteenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Fifteenth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• No (author has not specified anything, thus it's not a blocking amendment)

Merged amendment?

• Annulled due to having been proposed out of time
• After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, this amendment became valid by itself and has not been merged with others.

Seventeenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Civil rights and liberties, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Seventeenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Seventeenth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• No (author has not specified anything, thus it's not a blocking amendment)

Merged amendment?

• Annulled due to having been proposed out of time
• After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, this amendment became valid in spite of having been proposed out of time; thus, is merged to become Nineteenth Amendment.

Eighteenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Author's Rights, 3rd paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Eighteenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Eighteenth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• No (author has not specified anything, thus it's not a blocking amendment)

Merged amendment?

• Annulled due to having been proposed out of time
• After tacit agreement of all pirate parties representatives, this amendment became valid in spite of having been proposed out of time; thus, is merged to become Seventh Amendment.

Nineteenth Amendment

Affected paragraphs/sections

• About Civil rights and liberties, 1st paragraph

Amendment contents

• Contents of the Nineteenth Amendment

Discussion on the amendment

• Discussion on the Nineteenth Amendment

Blocking amendment?

• no (according to the rules)

Merged amendment?

• Is valid by itself and results from merging Twelfth Amendment and Seventeenth Amendment